Parfum Spray Sample
Is this grammatically correct?
We are looking to hire a content writer for our website, and I was wondering if this sample was grammatically correct:
"Agent Provocateur revamps Maîtresse Eau de Parfum with Liquid Gold, a sensual fragrance with luminous gold particles that glisten delicately on the skin. On the front of the red and gold glass flacon, the Agent Provocateur Maîtresse sits turning mysteriously away; on the reverse side, she appears again, surrounded in a swirling sea of sensual gold liquid. Spray generously onto décolleté to moisturize and beautifully fragrance flesh with the glow of precious gold."
The sample provided is grammatically quite correct.
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